Friday, February 12, 2010

Individual conferences: more than just a couple of days off

It's almost 3 p.m. Friday and I've met with the last student I'm expecting to see individually this fifth week of classes. I'm tired, but content, because I know the extra time individual conferences take from my schedule (50 min. x 2 classes = 1.5 hrs versus 30 min. x 18 = 9 hrs) makes a big difference in students' understanding, writing, and relationship to the class and to me.

In their book The St. Martin's Guide to Teaching Writing, Cheryl Glenn, Melissa A. Goldthwaite and Robert Connors say individual conferences are a critical teaching strategy for several reasons. Conferences allow instructors to get to know their students and their individual writing processes better (69). It's not that instructors don't want to get to know students on a personal level, but our primary role is to help you with your writing. Most instructors I work with genuinely care about their students, but the best way we can show that we care is to help you achieve your personal and course goals. I want to be friendly, but let's face it, after this May most of you will not care what's posted on my Facebook. You'll move on to other classes and other instructors. And I'll move on to other students (granted, they may not ever be able to match up to this class).

While we're working together for the next ten weeks, it helps that I know as much about your writing, your processes, your frustrations, questions, and ideas as possible. Conferences let both you and me ask questions, discuss strengths and weaknesses of your work, plan for future work, and explain writing strategies that might help you.

Glenn et al suggest that the best use of conference time is in discussing a piece of student work. It gives us something concrete to talk about and to refer to (71). This is especially useful when we have a previous version of the work to look at too. I can use this comparison to point to choices that you've already made about your work that you might not even be aware of. Sometimes it takes another person to point out what's going on in your work. The best writers get lots of feedback from their editors, writing groups, and other writers and readers whom they respect. That's the kind of writing community I'm trying to create in our class.

The best conferences have a little bit of a plan, but are flexible enough to cover whatever ground the student needs. Glenn et al say its good for the instructor to have some scripted questions in mind, like "What is your purpose in this project?" and "What main ideas are you trying to get across?" and "What is frustrating you about it?" (71). These kinds of questions allow you to keep ownership of your own work. It's not my job to tell you what to write or how to write it. In fact, that kind of prescriptive teaching will almost guarantee poor projects and a student who can't write outside of class. I refer to myself as a writing coach or mentor. I make suggestions and throw out ideas, but what happens in your work is still up to you.

You may have noticed that I began my conference with you by outlining what I hoped to accomplish regarding Projects 1 and 2. I also had some notes about things I wanted to be sure and cover with each of you. But it's more important that you get what you need, which is why I tried to get you to talk too. Research shows that the more dialogic (both student and instructor talking) a conference is, the better the results.

If time allowed, I'd hold conferences after each project, but then we wouldn't get as much ground covered and, frankly, I'd be worn out. Students may look forward to conference week because it means only 30 minutes face-to-face with me versus 1.5 hours sitting in our lovely Lafollette basement classroom. I look forward to conferences because they are the few times in the semester when we can really focus on your work individually.

I'd like to hear what you have to say about you experience with conference this week. Good and bad. Did anything surprise you? Did you get the answers you needed? Or is it just time off that you are happy to have?

Works Cited
Glenn, Cheryl, Melissa A. Goldthwaite, and Robert Connors. The St. Martin's Guide to Teaching Writing. 5th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin's, 2003. Print.

Thursday, February 11, 2010

Visualizing Beneficence

In our course text Writing: A Guide for College and Beyond, Lester Faigley points out that we live in a highly visual world that tries to influence us every day. "We are bombarded by images...They compete for our attention, urge us to buy things, and guide us on our way home from work" (272). This influence, however, is not often something of which we are aware. That's why, Faigley says, writing a visual analysis can help us consider not only the visuals, but what they are trying to get us to think, feel and/or do.

In Project 2, I ask that you pick a visual in one of the many communities in which you interact and analyze what's going on in its design. In a way, you are critically "reading" the image just as you critically read a printed article (remember that fun assignment from last semester?) You are looking for the choices that the designer, photographer, video editor, architect or artist made. These clues will help you answer the question: What values are being expressed in this visual? What is the creator saying is important? How is the artist trying to influence us to see the community that the image represents?

One of the images that people connected to Ball State see constantly is Beneficence. The sculpture sits at the south central part of campus, facing University Avenue. There are lots of photos of "Benny" on the BSU website, but it's worth the trip to see her in person. The sculpture stands in a lovely promenade with a series of columns surrounding Benny. The plaza is filled with flowers in spring and summer.

The history of Beneficence, and the struggle behind the construction and funding of the plaza is described in an article on the Bracken Library's archives and special collections web site. Benny's sculptor, Daniel Chester French, also created the 19-foot-high statue of a seated Abraham Lincoln at the Lincoln Memorial. French was commissioned by the Muncie Chamber of Commerce to create a sculpture to honor the Ball brothers, who founded Ball State University. He studied the Balls to come up with a concept that embodied their dedication to education and charity. (The word "beneficence" is related to the terms "beneficial" and "benefit," as in doing acts of kindness and charity, according to the Merriam-Webster Dictionary online.)

This visual representation of the values of education and philanthropy was eventually incorporated into the BSU logo. Art scholars can probably better explain the artistic influences and merits of Benny, but as an instructor and student, I see her first as a giver and receiver of knowledge. Certainly, her outstretched right hand can be seen as someone who is willing to take money (like the BSU Foundation or Alumni Association) but I sometimes worry that universities stress the need for financial support too much. So I will stick with the intentions of the sculptor: that Benny's outstretched hand represents our responsibilities to learn and to create new knowledge. I see it as a hand outstretched to help others by sharing our knowledge. This hand is empty, not because it wants something, but because it is inviting us to join Benny in her quest for understanding.

The decorated chest in her left hand does not contain all the knowledge, but all that is known so far. Beneficence invites us to be a part of filling that chest up. Her right foot is raised as if walking forward...moving forward to make more meaning and to share what we already know. Her wings, while perhaps part of the historic representation of knowledge, also can be reminders that the search for knowledge can take us far. Benny may have been standing in that same spot for almost seventy-three years, but the students and faculty she's seen have traveled widely and come from around the world.

These are the values that I believe Daniel Chester French tried to embody in Benny, and the ones that I think should drive almost everything we do at Ball State.
Works Cited

Logo. Ball State U. Web. 11 Feb. 2010.

Beneficence. "Campus Map." Ball State U. Web. 11 Feb. 2010.

"Beneficence." Merriam-Webster's Online Dictionary. Web. 11 Feb. 2010.

Benny.  Ball State U. Bracken Library Archives and Special Collections Research Center. 2003. Web. 11 Feb. 2010.

"Benny's Story: A History of Beneficence." Ball State U. Bracken Library Archives and Special Collections Research Center. 2003. Web. 11 Feb. 2010.

"Designing the Lincoln Memorial: Daniel Chester French and Henry Bacon." National Gallery of Art. 2010. Web. 12 Feb. 2010.

Faigley, Lester. Writing: A Guide for College and Beyond. 2nd brief ed. New York: Pearson, 2010.